october assesment LR(not finished)





1) Type up your feedback in full (you don't need to write the mark and grade if you want to keep this confidential).
WWW=Q3 is  a strong response so now the challenge is to reach that level or higher throughout the exam

EBI=easy mark misseds in q1 always read the question carefully, longer answert needed for q6,annotate unseen text

2) Read the mark scheme for this assessment carefully. Write down the mark you achieved for each question: 

Q1: 0

Q2: 1
Q3: 6

3) Identify one of your stronger questions. Why did you do better on this question? Use the mark scheme to help you with this. Q3 because of my use of analysis of feautures from the advert.

4) Identify one of your weaker questions. Why did you score lower on this particular question? Use the mark scheme to help you with this. Q6 i feel i scored lower because i was a bit confused with the question       

5) Finally, write a new, detailed paragraph for Question 3 - the unseen text 12 mark question. Use the mark scheme to identify anticipated content you can add to your response and make sure you refer to the text and write in detail. 





















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